First draft
Final draft
The first draft, I wanted to make changes because I thought I could make it better and sound more professional. I was happy with my final draft and I made some changes such as 'For a limited time only!' to 'This week only!', 'you will need some water' to 'pack a punch'. and 'So good' to 'Finger Lickin' Good'. I think these all sound more effective and flow better.
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